Yeah, I think it flows better. I keep having to edit though, as I find myself drifting back into the present 😅 got to love a good, old-fashioned cannibal 😜
you conjur up a very desolate and hopeless landscape with this one... lots of questions! Is this part of something bigger already or is it the start of something new... im having trouble keeping up with all my favourite writers whilst trying to write more myself!
I totally get what you mean! Substack is full of such amazing stories and getting round to reading all of them is such a mind-bender! But yes, this is part of something bigger. Thank you so much for giving it a read!
Well well, I spy more past tense. Oh seriously, cannibals are one of my favourite dystopian features.
Yeah, I think it flows better. I keep having to edit though, as I find myself drifting back into the present 😅 got to love a good, old-fashioned cannibal 😜
you conjur up a very desolate and hopeless landscape with this one... lots of questions! Is this part of something bigger already or is it the start of something new... im having trouble keeping up with all my favourite writers whilst trying to write more myself!
I totally get what you mean! Substack is full of such amazing stories and getting round to reading all of them is such a mind-bender! But yes, this is part of something bigger. Thank you so much for giving it a read!
when its good writing, it sucks you in and doesnt let go, I find 😎